mariomusicmaker1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Orr- 4 Brave Champions [FULL]]

It sounds worse...

Wow such a wonderfull track, but when i listen to the origonal and this back to back, i cant help but think this verion is severly crippled,

I have listened to the tracks both on my monitors and home theator.

First off, I love the way you went with this track, adds more variety then the origonal,
But i just cant get past the clarity issues, it seems so muddy and empty at the same time, the origonal was shiny and rich sounding, the bells and hits much more crisp and punchy,

i dont know what you did to change that, but i suggest changing it, or perhaps the kbps is to blame... I have seen 192 songs longer then 4 minutes on NG, im sure it would fit..
Any way, other then that, the track its self, from a musical perspective and non tecnical perspective is fantastic and a great improvement,

DavidOrr responds:

You got it- that's the kbps! I really didn't make too many changes to the overall mix- in fact- the overall mix is even brighter with more punch than the original. As you lower bitrates, mp3s shave off the highs and lows, which will result in less shimmer and definition.

Thanks for the review!

[z75 - Last Sight]

Not your best,

But a damn fine track indeed!

I love the track, The mixing could use a littlework, the bass could be sidechained to give the song a clearer sound, just a sugestion, as the track is overal, fantastic

great job bud.

Xorberax responds:

Ya, I know it's not my best, but I recently broke out of my writers block with this song.
So expect better in some new songs.

[_/| Uplifter v2 |\_]

DUDE FUCK NO!

Oh my god, that helped it so much :D

Fantastic sone, once again, This one gets my fave. fantastic job!

[__/| Uplifter |\__]

Hell yeah man!

I would not be surprised if this made it to the top 5 in the next few weeks.

Veryt cool track, only thing i would change is the kick and the tempo. as mentioned below,

nudge the temop up from 130 to around 135 ( it is 130 right? )
And add some reverp and a little more mid range to that kick, possibly side chain the reverberation with the pulsing synth, ( that would be fucking cool im going to go try that now )

AND ANY WAY. yea Love the track, going on my ipod. fantastic job, as usual.

[Fredgy - Eurodancer {Remix}]

Oh wow.

This is very excellent!

I love every thing abou this song, The mixing is fantastic, your effects are beyond fantastic, very euro sounding, And i guess that is exactly what you where going for so congrats on that.

uh the drums, thre very nice and all, but i think they could use a tiny bit more 8k+ hz, they seem to be fairly low in the mix and dont stand out as much as i would espect them to in a song like this, but that is just superficial,

fantastical song my friend!

Fredgy responds:

ok, drums need to be standing out more :p
i'll look for that :D
but my fl studio is doing weird atm xD
it lags sooo hard atm =//
i think there is something wrong with my pc or something lol :p
gotta try another day though ^^

[::Silence::]

oh nice

This is a nice track to listen to on the way home from work :D

Ill give it a try tonight,

5/5

ccc75 responds:

Yeah man, thanks for the compliment. I hope my song can help you relax.

[z75 - In The Blue]

Cool track!

Yea I like this a lot, great sounds and fantastic progression,

The only thing you need to work on is your sidechaining, it sounds like it is cutting off a bit too quickly for my taste, but that is just personal preference,

An excellent track, with exelent mixing = a 5 for you,

[MS - Fallout 3 Gun Sounds!]

I have always wanted to do this...

From the first time that i watched the CSS one, i have always wanted to make a song purely out of gun samples, but i have never been able to get enough samples from a game to do a proper song,

but this is mixed so very well, and arranged even better. so mandatory 5's are in order.

job very well done.

[Diamond dust zone remix]

Iz nice

It nice, like your choice of synths and instroments, but it is lacking any thing origonal. and I have herd this song quite often on newgrounds, so you get a 4/5 and a 7.

improvemints.

percussion would be nice,

[Eternal Hope - BK]

Damn nice!

Every thing fits very well together, the only thing i did not like was the percusion, you need to stick some effects in there, sounded very dry and stale by the end of the song, other then that, fantastic track, with a lot more time put into this it could be fantastic, i recomend you keep at this track, or build on it for your next song,