mariomusicmaker1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Orr- 4 Brave Champions [FULL]]

It sounds worse...

Wow such a wonderfull track, but when i listen to the origonal and this back to back, i cant help but think this verion is severly crippled,

I have listened to the tracks both on my monitors and home theator.

First off, I love the way you went with this track, adds more variety then the origonal,
But i just cant get past the clarity issues, it seems so muddy and empty at the same time, the origonal was shiny and rich sounding, the bells and hits much more crisp and punchy,

i dont know what you did to change that, but i suggest changing it, or perhaps the kbps is to blame... I have seen 192 songs longer then 4 minutes on NG, im sure it would fit..
Any way, other then that, the track its self, from a musical perspective and non tecnical perspective is fantastic and a great improvement,

DavidOrr responds:

You got it- that's the kbps! I really didn't make too many changes to the overall mix- in fact- the overall mix is even brighter with more punch than the original. As you lower bitrates, mp3s shave off the highs and lows, which will result in less shimmer and definition.

Thanks for the review!

[z75 - Last Sight]

Not your best,

But a damn fine track indeed!

I love the track, The mixing could use a littlework, the bass could be sidechained to give the song a clearer sound, just a sugestion, as the track is overal, fantastic

great job bud.

Xorberax responds:

Ya, I know it's not my best, but I recently broke out of my writers block with this song.
So expect better in some new songs.

[Fredgy - Eurodancer {Remix}]

Oh wow.

This is very excellent!

I love every thing abou this song, The mixing is fantastic, your effects are beyond fantastic, very euro sounding, And i guess that is exactly what you where going for so congrats on that.

uh the drums, thre very nice and all, but i think they could use a tiny bit more 8k+ hz, they seem to be fairly low in the mix and dont stand out as much as i would espect them to in a song like this, but that is just superficial,

fantastical song my friend!

Fredgy responds:

ok, drums need to be standing out more :p
i'll look for that :D
but my fl studio is doing weird atm xD
it lags sooo hard atm =//
i think there is something wrong with my pc or something lol :p
gotta try another day though ^^

[::Silence::]

oh nice

This is a nice track to listen to on the way home from work :D

Ill give it a try tonight,

5/5

ccc75 responds:

Yeah man, thanks for the compliment. I hope my song can help you relax.

[Yeah Yeah (oooh!)]

Neat

Yea love the pitch adjustments, great sound.

drums feel a little distant, but good stuff man, going on my ipod for sure,

The-MickMad responds:

Thanks, that's my ultimate intent: being on the ipod of maaaaaaaaaany people XD btw I still don't know if this is good for being in Techno section rather than in the D'n'B section...actually I just make my music not inspiring to neither genres, so it's hard to tag this well XD any suggestion??

[lugia's theme]

You will never improve...

if you dont accept criticism. Any way, this is just 2 synths, so i dont see how this took you for ever to do, what i would do, * This is the part where i criticize your work* Is add A percussion line to it, ANY thing would help, as this track is very barren, and a total bore fest, but other then that, your synths sound very nice together, and the melody is done accuracy,

I sugest getting a midi keyboard and hooking it up to your DAW if THIS took you for ever, would take you exactly 27 seconds if you had a keyboard....

but good job and all that, hope to here some improvements from your future work,

XCyberHacker responds:

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p.s
ty that means a lot coming from you

[z75 - Broken Dreams]

5/5

very nice effects, quite impressive, only thing i would change. cut the bass back a bit, it is too much for my system, and if its too much for me. its too much for any one ^^.

nice song, k tkx bi.

Xorberax responds:

Okay, I guess I should cut the bass back a bit, although it sounds good on my system. Maybe you need to upgrade? Or you can lower your bass.

[Dear Earth]

HAha oh wow,

Dose this even require a review? no, it is too fucking amazing for criticism, amazing job.

now that i think about it, turn down the vocals just a tad and it would help bring out that wonderfull bassline more,

Itchimaru-kun responds:

thank you! I took your advice, does it sound better?

[(Chzz) Always Remember You]

this would be so great,

This song is in desprite need of mixing, and better piano, but your vocals are great, and it came together nicely,

just turn every thing WAY down next time k?

giovanni808 responds:

Mixing how?

[Breaking Nintendo (Dance Mix)]

Oh my god...

This is amazing work!

I dont even know what to say, this is perfection.

Reminds me of mega man alot.

Stargame responds:

Ooooh, comparison to Megaman music, now THAT'S a compliment. Thanks dude, I appreciate it :D